Suspense Story.

 Ptengland school was mysterious, not filled with many students but extremely creepy to say the least. A specific classroom doesn’t know what will happen next..
Alazye, Jayla, and finally Helena, a specific trio that never listens to any teachers that are in front of them at all. 

 

Jayla was carelessly scrolling through her phone without a care. While Helena was loudly munching on chips, not being able to hear the teachers sayings. Alazye was seen throwing crumpled paper across the room, messing the classroom more than it already was, completely ignoring Ms Thompsons pleas of attention.

“These girls never listen..” Ms Thompson muttered quietly to herself, she tried many desperate attempts to get the trio’s attention, but none of them seemed to work. “Class we’ll be working on this task for the next hour!!” Her gaze slowly went to the trio watching their every movement. “Girls, I’m expecting you to listen.” Ms Thompson said sternly as her gaze left the trio.

 

 Helena was too stubborn to listen at all, there were loud sounds of chewing with dropping crumbs left on the floor. “Dude this newest flavour is awesome bruh..” Helena mentioned before stuffing her face with more. Alazye specifically was throwing crumpled papers across the room making an incredible mess, accidentally hitting Jayla’s forehead. Jayla wasn’t fazed at all as she was too busy scrolling through her phone without care.

“Boring, dumb, cool..” Jayla spoke to herself scrolling through. The trio was too busy doing their own thing to care..

Throughout the class it has passed one hour, and it was about time to have recess. During class the trio had left the classroom immediately, going outside to enjoy their time. As they walked Helena carelessly threw her plastic chip packet to the floor making the wind push it away. “Dude.. I’m still hungry bru.” Helena muttered before stopping her tracks, before looking behind gazing at the classroom they had just left from. “Dude’s I’m going back, and getting the rest of my snacks.” Helena didn’t wait for a response and left.

Helena started whistling to herself a silly tone before reaching the entrance of the classroom. For some reason she started to feel goosebumps running across her arm. “What..?” She whispered.. The lights on the ceiling started flickering as the weather started to change, dark clouds hovering the school. Helena looked behind her as she swore she saw a dark figure hovering behind her.

As she thought, the figure was extremely tall and completely black, with only a white glow in the eyes. Is what Helena thought it looked like, it didn’t look human or alive.

As she kept looking behind her trying to figure out what person or thing was out there watching her…

“U-uhm, hello???” She finally spoke, getting the stuttering words out her mouth. “..run…run..” Whispered voices were heard in the classroom. Helena had to check it out, so she walked towards where the whispers were coming from, the closer she got the clearer the whispers got. “run…before…too … .late..” She heard them, she was finally able to hear them clearer. She didn’t need to be told twice as she left, as she was halfway near the entrance of the classroom. The door shut.

Leaving Helena all alone, or what she thought she was. She heard silence, there was no noise at all and she became extremely sweaty. Her blood ran cold for a moment and sudden shivers started to appear. “What…who’s there? What are you?” Helena spoke out to the classroom as a flickering in the lights appeared once again. As if it was responding to Helena’s response.

 

 “Run now. You’re not safe. Should’ve listened. You’re in danger.” 

The words started to form into a louder voice. “I’m not safe?.. I should’ve listened? To whom!?” Helena was finally able to break the door and run out. She could’ve sworn the shadowy figure was following her until she bumped into Leni.. “watch where ya going dude. Before I give you a knuckle sandwich.” Helena looked up at the figure admiring their presence. “I’M INSANELY SORRY!!” Helena slowly walked away still having goosebumps from the earlier event.

“Helena, Jayla, Alazye!!.. It’s not the time to be sleeping!” Helena stopped her tracks before looking back. “What..? sleeping..?” she then saw the flickering figure. “It’s so…cold” Helena opened her eyes slowly, figuring out why she was in the classroom instead of outside. “What..?” Helena muttered. “You three were all sleeping during class!” Leni said while looking up and down at Helena.

“Sleeping? So it was all a dream..?” Helena replied back to Leni. “Don’t know what you mean but it’s class time! We have to listen to the teacher, remember??” Leni spoke while looking at Ms Thompson, teacher of the class. “Right” Helena then looked at Alazye and Jayla’s horrified faces, so Helena assumed they were all in the same dream.. With the same shadowy figure.

From this day on, The trio started to listen to any teachers that were in front of them. And the so-called bully, Leni was always a straight A student.

Description: This is a suspense story about the MC getting a weird creepy dream, a figure who haunts the MC and her friends for not listening to teachers, i actually hope you enjoy reading this >:3… Im veryveryglad for sharing my suspense idea ;3 !! literary have a great day .

2 thoughts on “Suspense Story.

  1. Fakalofa lahi-atu & Malo e lelei
    Chevelle !

    This is such an amazing blog post you’ve written, It’s creative and awesome It’s like a scripture that’s awesome I loved how you mentioned your friends and made this super creative and interesting.

    Keep up the amazing work Chevelle .
    – Alazye RM5

    1. Heyyy !! Kia ora Alazye!! Im thankful you took your time to comment ~<3 !! Thanks for the mention of ME mentioning you guyssy !! I appreciate the detailed comment you wrote!! If i were to write a story i would def put you in it!! Along with our other friends >_0 !!

      – Chebqlls.H !! Room 5 !!!

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